Hello Albert, my name is Salamasina I am a year six at Owairaka school. I really liked your post because it was funny and I liked how you looked at the face of the person to see what you should write.ππππ Blog you later.
My name is Charlotte and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I really enjoyed reading your comic!
I really liked this activity because I think comics are awesome! Do you read any comics? I really like superhero ones, what ones do you like?
It would be really helpful for your readers if you included more about the activity and the story in your blog post. This will help the readers who have not seen the video, to still be able to understand what is happening in your comic.
I hope to see you continue to take part in the Summer Learning Journey this summer and look forward to seeing your posts in the future!
Hello Albert, my name is Salamasina I am a year six at Owairaka school. I really liked your post because it was funny and I liked how you looked at the face of the person to see what you should write.ππππ Blog you later.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Charlotte and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I really enjoyed reading your comic!
I really liked this activity because I think comics are awesome! Do you read any comics? I really like superhero ones, what ones do you like?
It would be really helpful for your readers if you included more about the activity and the story in your blog post. This will help the readers who have not seen the video, to still be able to understand what is happening in your comic.
I hope to see you continue to take part in the Summer Learning Journey this summer and look forward to seeing your posts in the future!
NgΔ mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey
nice
ReplyDeleteKia ora Albert, I'm Kaya from Ahipara school. I like your blog post but maybe next time you could add a little bit more description.
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